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You Are A Rose: Part 2 by =Mattiello:iconMattiello:



You Are A Rose: Part 2




When has it been since I last embraced you?
Yet, I still remember how your fragrance was like that of a wild rose,
Lifting my spirit up as high as it will go.
Dulling my senses, I should only think of you,
the way you felt beneath my hands,
the way you smiled,
the way your flowing hair hung down your shoulders
and across your face,
the way you looked at me,
innocent and happy.
I wish this embrace could last forever.
i can hear your heartbeat.
You are anxious,
wondering when you should let go.
Not wanting to let go to early,
for fear of hurting me,
not wanting to hold on too long,
for fear of seeming obsessive.
I shall tell you what to do.
Do not let go.
Stay with me.
Feel my strength pouring into you.
Feel your troubles ebb away.
Feel my love enveloping you.
See your fears being chased away.
I am here, my love.
I will protect you.
I will be whatever you wish me to be.
I will do anything you want me to do.
Do you want the moon?
It is yours.
Do you want the stars?
They are yours.
Do you want my undying love?
It is yours.
Do not let go.
stay with me.
Feel the warmth of my embrace,
my love that will forever envelope you.
Stay...stay...please stay.
©2007-2009 =Mattiello
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This is the second part of the first poem I have ever written. It is four years old, and I became hooked.

Read all other parts to got the full story.

I had no love when I wrote this. this was for the love I would have in the future.

this poem is what i would feel the moment we embrace and then kiss.
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"You are anxious,
wondering when you should let go.
Not wanting to let go to early,
for fear of hurting me,
not wanting to hold on too long,
for fear of seeming obsessive."

Really great stanza.
thank you very much!

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yay! thank you!

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would you like it all in one poem, as it was origionaly, or in three parts as it was here?

well, I think for your sake, I'll put it back to one poem so you don't have to receive three different emails. lol. I'll send it to you. :)

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wow, man you are full of talent VERY inspiring o_o :+fav:

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yay! i'm glad! thank you so much!

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Your welcome! :D

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can i favorite this... like.... 79 times???

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