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The Key in the Statue. by =Mattiello:iconMattiello:

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Secrets tarnished by cataclysmic lies.
Silver and gold; a lover’s sighs.
Molded and shaped to perfection,
I take off the mask

Polished and shining;
Exquisite beauty in form,
But hollow inside,
I shall break it apart.

It is all dust
Sifting through my fingers.
Naught is left, but a key.
A key of iron.

Rusty though it may be,
it is still strong.
And it is in the palm
of my hand.


I gave it to you a long time ago.
©2008-2009 =Mattiello
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hmmm. What is the key pray tell?

I am finally able to write something. For Ais.
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~iAes:iconiAes: Apr 7, 2008, 2:34:39 PM
...
I'm crying a lot lately, I've noticed.


I never meant anything to do that to you.
And if it's iron, well. I'm just an idiot, really.
=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 7, 2008, 2:35:44 PM
it's my heart ais. I gave it to you.

What do you mean.

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~iAes:iconiAes: Apr 7, 2008, 2:38:54 PM
...I know.

I mean...that I'm really really stupid.
But you knew that, didn't you?
=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 7, 2008, 2:39:50 PM
that only depends on what you do now, love.

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~Noster7:iconNoster7: Apr 7, 2008, 2:41:49 PM
Great poem! I like the "Rusty though it may be..." line.
=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 7, 2008, 2:46:45 PM
Thank you! I thought it was cool too.

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~Noster7:iconNoster7: Apr 7, 2008, 3:19:12 PM
You're welcome!
~ravenonthewind:iconravenonthewind: Apr 7, 2008, 5:44:13 PM
beautiful symbolism! i particularly like the first and last stanzas.

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This is where our paths must split,
For I haven't yet the wings to fly with you.
I can only hope for a day, once my wings I have received,
When the winds will cause our paths to cross once more.
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