The Ambiguous Work of Petrified Skeletons
Synthetic ambiguities to comprehend
social and personal virulent teachings-
a vice upon the soul-
that are congruent with another's
personal tendencies and parallel
with the world's values
Yet, generous inconsistencies
given to the fool of faith-
a faith not lived, but spoken-
and seen as a kind and vivacious spirit.
But, dimensions put aside.
a skeleton appears- calcium-petrified
and doused in chlorine-
bones crumble into dust and
is seen in the light upon
a gust of coincidental winds
©2008-2009 =Mattiello
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Full Title: The Ambiguous Work of Petrified Skeletons
This is simply about those that walk around giving money, love, anything, just to get a good name. many politicians, governments, and even individuals are accustomed to this way of life.
the wordiness show the reader a facade granted by the world, and it takes an individual's enlightened mind on the matter to realize this.
This is simply about those that walk around giving money, love, anything, just to get a good name. many politicians, governments, and even individuals are accustomed to this way of life.
the wordiness show the reader a facade granted by the world, and it takes an individual's enlightened mind on the matter to realize this.
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Comments"a gust of coincidental winds"
That's a fabulous line. I want to draw a picture for it. :3 I'm fixing all your errors in all your poems buddy. I have the time to do so...
One grammatical error: Error: is seen in the light upon Correction: Are seen in the light upon -- I've left DeviantArt Because of this: [link] Haha..your welcome. It had so many different interesting things...I didn't know what else to say! Ha!
 -- I've left DeviantArt Because of this: [link] I will! Swoosh!
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