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I'm the kind of person that
notices whether or not
a tear can be wiped away
with a soft caress of my hand,
a passionate kiss full
of tender love,
or sitting beside a friend and just
lending them an ear.

I'll lay down this pen
and grasp your hand in mine.
I'll cry with you
if you need help
washing away the pain.
I'll trace the soft tendrils of
a dying love and
wipe away your mascara.


I'll run my fingers through
your hair, cup your delicate chin
in the cradle of my hand, and rest
my lips upon yours.
Two souls will become one,
and we will share a lifetime in
that single moment.

I'll grab pillows for the both
of us, and we'll knock 'em
around until the feathers fly.
I'll sit and listen to the symphonies
of your woes and worries, and
we'll alternate between
allegro and andante.

I'll help you collect your tears,
put your makeup back on,
and let you breath again.
I'll wrap up our memories,
help gather the feathers
so that you can fly again,
and play the music louder than ever -
all because I'm that kind of person
©2009 =Mattiello
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Author's Comments

I was so sad, because I thought I lost this. Apparently by putting this into the category "journal poetry", it automatically becomes scrap? Whatever, here it is!

:w00t: Yay me. I found it.

We all need someone to listen once in a while. After talking to a new friend, I decided that it was about time that I write what I feel. Not that I haven't before, of course, but raw emotion is simply wonderful

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:iconrlkirkland:
I'm so glad you found it too. The world, (the small part which we can touch), desperately needs people like you. A theme in which everyone can relate to, and which inwardly all yearn for.

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People are Important - Goals much less
When we stop learning we have begun to die - Shamelessly Purloined
:iconthomas0607:
This reminds me of when we spoke about relationships several months ago. This poem marks a true gentlemen; that is something our current generation lacks in volumes. :no: We need more people like those reflected in this poem. :nod:

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Eevee Roxas: *sighs* Look, there's no way we're going to change her opinion. Let's just go along with it, ok? She's leaving, and that's tha- ...HOLY-CHRIST-IT'S-A-PERSIM-BERRY!!! *noms*

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:iconravenonthewind:
i love this. :clap: this entire poem just feels good. we need more people to be like this.

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This is where our paths must split,
For I haven't yet the wings to fly with you.
I can only hope for a day, once my wings I have received,
When the winds will cause our paths to cross once more.
:iconeatingmyownfears:
yay you! :dance:

--
Don't blame me.

I'm just here for the cookies.
:iconwitheredlilies:
This is such a perfect depiction of exactly what every person needs. Reminds me of what I used to have a long time ago in a friend of mine, who is no longer speaking to me as of Sunday.

--
“I don’t ignore you. I just pretend I don’t hear you.”
- Dad
:iconmattiello:
:hug:

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:iconmattiello:
You're quite right.

Yeah, this was from the heart, so thank you very much, man.

:bow:

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:iconmattiello:
:bow: Thank you so much. I really am glad you love it!

:glomp:

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:iconmattiello:
Awww, I'm so sorry. I hope it works out eventually.


But thank you so very much. I appreciate it. :D

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