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        May I hold your hand?
        A beautiful smile lit her face.
It sang a song unto me.
And the light could not shine brighter,
for her sweetness was plain to see.

        Oh, how I remember the first time we met.
        Each gazing upon the other. Eyes meet. Look away.
Together, wind and water show their power,
while whispering it's anticipation and
catering the potentials for seemingly endless hours.

        Then, a carriage awaits for the grand show.
        The perfect drama unconsciously unfolding.
A dark operatic atmosphere permeates the air
adding yet more excitement to my thundering veins,
because beside me is life's most fair.

        Somewhat later the bell begins to toll.
        The steed ready to whisk me away.
Yet, she stills us both with an upraised hand
and pulled me from the heights to bequeath a divine kiss.
And I was off, gone away from those Beulah lands.

        But before I relinquished my stay in heaven,
        I promised her one small thing.
If she would allow one more visit(upon her command),
then I shall of course be happy to oblige,
for her love is what makes me a man.
©2007-2009 =Mattiello
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:icondarkshadowrage:
This is so touching, and very beautiful. wow

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thank you so very much, my friend. I'm glad you like it so much!

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:iconsomething44:
Very well written! the poem's deep and yet very romantic. :thumbsup:

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This is a well written piece. :nod:

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if you go with it
it inevitably takes you where you were going anyway. ~adwa
:iconmattiello:
thanks you very much. :)

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:iconmattiello:
thank you so very much!

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You are welcome. :nod:

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Life has it's ways
if you go with it
it inevitably takes you where you were going anyway. ~adwa
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