[x]

deviantART

 

Moonbeams and Heartstrings by =Mattiello:iconMattiello:



Radiant and Exquisite;
a glowing beauty
bestows her gift
upon mortal men.

Her arms stretch
from the heavens
to envelop wary,
yet exhausted gentlemen.

She caresses and
taunts the benighted,
roping in hopes
and bashing dreams.

Hearts chained to hearts;
blood laced with wings -
to fly upon night's embrace
on moonbeams and heartstrings.
©2008-2009 =Mattiello
Details
Submitted: May 12, 2008
File Size: 538 bytes
Image Size: 0 bytes
Resolution: 0×0
Comments: 41
Favourites & Collections: 10 [who?]

Views
Total: 171
Today: 0

Downloads
Total: 0
Today: 0

Thumb

Author's Comments

This is for ~AmayasFantasy's contest. I hope it works out for it.

Let's see if you can figure it out this time. Here's your clue: This is more fiction.
[x]

Critiques


Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Devious Comments

love 2 2 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0

Comments


Thank you so much for your submission! its beautiful!

--
In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


Please check out my novels at [link]
haha. I was going to send it to you, but I suppose you already have it? I hope i do well! :hug:

--
[link] Counting Clouds - an exciting book!

[link] My tutorials!


If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!
Oh, lovely. This is a truly beautiful, well thought-out poem. I adore it!
Love the last stanza.

Is it about Dream?
Somewhat. She's a vampire.

--
[link] Counting Clouds - an exciting book!

[link] My tutorials!


If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!
Oooh, fabulous. It's great! :D
This is really good! Good luck in the contest!
I just caught it! Thank you so much! :hug: its beautiful!

--
In my own salvation
And your eternal slumber
Legend shall speak
Of sacrifice at world’s end
The wind sails over the water’s surface
Quietly, but surely
~ Loveless


Please check out my novels at [link]
Thanks!

--
[link] Counting Clouds - an exciting book!

[link] My tutorials!


If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!
You're welcome!

--
[link] Counting Clouds - an exciting book!

[link] My tutorials!


If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!
Thanks!

--
[link] Counting Clouds - an exciting book!

[link] My tutorials!


If you LOVE it then suggest it to a GM - now!

Site Map