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Death loves Life by =Mattiello:iconMattiello:



Bombs fall, thundering their war cry into the night,
destroying landmarks and ideals,
heaving missiles and fire into the sky.
Toxic fumes poison the air,
suffocating the living,
while feeding the dead.
Winged things fall to their deaths,
unmarked and forever forgotten
by their peers and their loved ones -
also given up for dead.

Smooth landscapes become
rough terrain; like the pock-marked
face of an adolescent -
still beautiful, but forever changed.
Cars parked inside buildings, blackened,
sizzling, and seemingly empty.
Skeletons forever at the wheel,
unaware of their nonexistence -
still waiting to make that turn
that will take them to a singed hole in the ground.

Charred sticks mark a once beautiful garden,
though the benches have vanished,
and fountains spurt the drudge of the land
revealing the toll the land has taken.
Flowers wilt, knowing that their brethren
have perished, and saddened for their own
imminent demise, for who will care of them?

Death saddened himself.
For what glory is their in masses
dying at the push of a button?
What ever became of the times
in which one died because another bested
him or her with strength or mind alone?
Death continues to collect the souls of the dead,
sending each to the stairs.
A long and merciless task this has become,
because most have died so quickly
they continue with their own lives,
walking to their homes
and standing with their mouths agape.
Where have their homes gone?

He continues his chore throughout the night,
aware of still more jobs elsewhere.
Decay has begun to permeate the air,
in his wake, for all behind him is empty -
Truly empty now.
Done with the town,
Death moves onward,
to the other jobs that await his care.

The sun rises, blushing with fury
at what is seen below.  
Ominous clouds herald the coming of rain,
to wash away the pain of the land -
tears of grief from the sun.
Alas, when the rain has ceased to fall -
the gardens clean, the waters clear,
the fumes gone, and the bodies washed away,
the walls now fallen to cover the holes,
and the flowers standing proud,
because they know that Mother will not
leave them to fate -
we see a spot of green,
risen up from the ashes,
giving all the promise of life
as a certainty, not as a wish.
©2008 =Mattiello
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We all have those moments where we feel like life is... well unimportant or we just take it for granted. I hope you look at it this way.

Life will continue, because it is just that. It is Life.

enjoy!

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=iAes:iconiAes: Apr 23, 2008, 4:29:33 PM
"Winged things fall to their deaths"
Beautiful.

I think this may be my favourite of all your poems. It's gorgeous.
Is this your attempt at the daisy thing?
=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 23, 2008, 5:51:54 PM
Thank you, darling!

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=iAes:iconiAes: Apr 23, 2008, 5:56:04 PM
You're quite welcome!
~AmayasFantasy:iconAmayasFantasy: Apr 23, 2008, 7:24:11 PM
awesome! I love this one too... it reminds me of the pictures that I have of the war my Grandpa took...

suffocating the living,
while feeding the dead.

I love this part... such an interesting way to say it!!!

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~something44:iconsomething44: Apr 24, 2008, 10:00:32 AM
I once learned in a philosophy class that the we are already dying the moment we were born, it's up to you on how you deal with it. Either the concept of knowing your own death can be your saving grace or your ticking time clock... Life is what you make it as I always say. I've always told myself that I'd be ready for death, even if I die atleast I died trying to live. That's the beauty of life. It won't come to you a second time around, you just have one life to live.... Excellent poem buddy! The imagery helped me a lot on what to think.

P.S. I read this poem while listening to a FF7:Crisis Core soundtrack. It helped me a lot in trying to analyze the content of this poem (in my own way I guess)...

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=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 24, 2008, 10:02:14 AM
really? wow, I'll have to look in on that. thanks. This poem jsut sort of came to me. I'm very glad you like it.

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=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 24, 2008, 10:14:58 AM
Thank you very much! I'm quite glad you liked it!

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Who can hate love when Love begets Hate?

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~AmayasFantasy:iconAmayasFantasy: Apr 24, 2008, 11:35:01 AM
its stirring and emotional. As someone famous once said (I cant remember who right now)

"GOOD poetry should stirr the soul, make you see things in a different light, and reveal something about humanity, rather for good or ill. Those which do neither is only words, not poetry"

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=Mattiello:iconMattiello: Apr 24, 2008, 1:18:02 PM
THank you so much. that means so much to me leia!

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